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I would say... Could you point out what in your opinion makes this drawing “Steampunk” ?

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I would say... Could you point out what in your opinion makes this drawing “Steampunk” ?

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Liz Schatz

Nice drawing, but steampunky not so much, the key elements of steampunk are iron, coal, and steam (also fire and smoke), try merging an "old coal stove" and train engine to your design, it should be more mechanical and crude, have some pipes and stuff like that, an engine about to blow up because of the steam pressure and steam leaks everywere would be a nice touch too, also show little bumps on the metal as if it were hit by a wrench to fix it like in the old times, and because of the extra weight of the metal, a huge balloon should look more "realistic"

Jessie Besson

Sonja Kovacevic

Kent Hickson

It reminded me a bit of the airship from the song "Little Talks by Of Monster and Men"

Aimee Hogg

Reminds me of Stardust

Preethii Kuumaar Patnaaik

You'd need some kind of propulsion Also I'd make the balloon bigger and most importantly, double or triple the ropes cause it feels like if one got cut the whole ship would crash

Janie Riddle

It's a bit Final Fantasy-ish design. Looks very nice, tho the fins are a bit large for my personal taste, especially the back fin/under fin. Is the rudder there to allow it to steer in water too? One would think the tail fin would be enough, if it's only for flying in the air. I would also make a nicer, big wavy flag instead of that small golf hole-flag thingie (or some other structure) on top, as it looks slightly out of place. And maybe add some guiding light? Here is a 6 minute masking with Affinity, I'm not a hand drawer (sadly, would like to learn), so it's just to visualize what I mean. I think it's a very nice basis which you can use to design alternative versions, also very well drawn. Would love to see some more sleek/aggressive "war ship" version of your design too.

Usman Jehan

Whenever drawing something like this always make sure every little part is playing some important role in the operation of the machine or the vehicle. Don't just add fins for the sake of it, make them look like they move in a particular motion to help steer or Propel the device in a particular direction or act as a parachute in case it falls or in any other such event. Make sure that if somebody pointed to anyone part of your vehicle and asked what does this do you have an answer

Jessica Bell-McLean

Not exactly steampunk, but you'd find some ideas in the role playing game "Antheas" (french at least)

Nana K-Smart

Have a look at Mortal Engines Fan Arts (not the movie) and maybe you could get a couple of new ideas... Also, i like your sketch. It kinda reminds me of an old Tradewinds game.

Nancy Tamang

I like it. I think you got potential little potato. Perhaps try some other industrial machinery drawing to perfect your steampunk style. Good work!

Umair Abbasi

„Here i invented breathing... wait you do that too?“ nice effort but damn similar to every steampunk airship there is

Christy De Pasquale

Awesome category? Seriously? Also get off to some dedicated site, we're supposed to post memes here.

John P Irwin

I love it. It’s really beautiful and I can’t imagine it looking better. Frame it!

Novlet Van-Whervin

I’d say you need to consider what would be contained inside the ship in terms of rooms and stuff a bit more to get the proportions and scale right. Based off the size of the windows the body of the ship seems a bit scrawny in order to be able to fit things like storage, engine rooms, commissary, sleeping quarters etc for the crew. Plus if its steampunk don’t be afraid to add a patchwork of steampunky stuff; pipes haphazardly going in and out of the body of the ship, some odd gears acting as a mechanism to control its height and direction, stuff like that. It seems a bit more fantasy atm

Kenzie Patton

I really like it. If I could draw I would out try out a larger flag on top. A really large one that you could amost hear moving in the wind, that gives the whole picture a sense of motion.

Mick Omerta Chinchio

It looks pretty good, but adding perspective really makes a drawing much more impressive, you should give it a try!

Prabha Radhakrishnan

May I suggest a chimney with steam, then I would draw it some old clock stuff, machinery from the industrial revolution and a powerfull way of propultion like some future/steampunk rockets, Idk xD keep drawing

Paul Hopp

Besides the fact that it's not steampunk because it's missing some key elements your lines are freaking awesome. I would make the outlines thicker, but besides that it's awesome work

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